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Astradia
4th Nov 2019, 1:00 AM

Off to the Black Lake they go.

I had to fix up the last page because I forgot to put the blood stains. They're added now. Hooray!

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BuilderJim
5th Nov 2019, 2:33 PM

I am SO glad her and Blue aren't being reported! Also, it may help with readability and against confusion to use differing colors when two or more characters are talking. :)

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Reaper Dragon
8th Nov 2019, 4:29 AM

I believe that’s currently being used to differentiate between languages.

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Astradia
8th Nov 2019, 6:27 AM

It is. I'll play around with a few ideas to make it easier. This weekend I'll rework the placement of the bubbles on this page to see what works.

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Astradia
8th Nov 2019, 6:26 AM

Jes isn't all that sad an elite was killed. The less of them the better in her opinion.
I'll have to think of a way to make it clearer when two people are speaking. I do want to stay away from using anymore text colours because I use a fair amount already. Maybe slightly changing the bubbles opacity. Hmm not sure. I'll play around with it. Thank you for the feed back! :)

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BuilderJim
8th Nov 2019, 12:52 PM

Well I guess Jess isn't all that wrong. And no problem!

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Astradia
10th Nov 2019, 8:08 PM

I've changed the layout and added text to hopefully make it easier to read. :D

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BuilderJim
11th Nov 2019, 5:42 AM

👍

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Astradia
11th Nov 2019, 4:28 PM

Awesome!

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