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Astradia
17th Apr 2017, 10:42 AM

Sorry this is a little bit late. it's been a busy weekend. Enjoy! :D

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f0xh0und696
17th Apr 2017, 5:24 PM

Welp, that plan went up in FLAMES pretty quickly. poor Flixy (I decree a new nickname).

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Astradia
18th Apr 2017, 2:58 AM

It certainly didn't go as planned. :D Flanix won't like his new nickname, but then he doesn't get a choice anyway. XD

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Reaper Dragon
17th Apr 2017, 11:19 PM

That reads in my opinion like Lance talking to Flix, the speech bubble on its own in a frame with black background. The text is red though? If that panel was on the right I'd have thought it was Flix talking to Lance.

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Astradia
18th Apr 2017, 2:54 AM

Opps sorry I see my mistake. The text in the black box is Lance. It should be in the colour black and different font for the common language. I'll change the wording as bit as well to make it a bit easier to tell who's speaking. :D

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